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Monday, 26 November 2018

Australia

hey readers im going to be telling you about going to Australia.



i was at my house and we were waiting for the shuttle it was really boring. after the shuttle came and we went to the airport. on the shuttle my mum had a selfie stick so we tried to take photos but it was to dark. and then mum got it to work it was so cool. 


at the airport we went to check in our bags. after that we went to a restaurant and i got a Milo. me and Brooklyn got really bored so Brooklyn gave me his WiFi and i started to play on my Chromebook. me and my brother Brooklyn saw whales it was really cool.

when we went out of the airport we had to get into the two vans that we brought and we went to my aunts house. in my aunts fridge there was lots of chocolate. I ate three freddos. we had to go back in the vans and go to the house that we are staying at.

at the house we had to unpack. we chose our bedrooms i didn't want to be in the same bedroom as mum and dad bu i had to.

on the fifth day at Australia we went to movie world i brought a camera and bring into movie world. when we went inside. first we went this kid roller coaster called road runner everyone was screaming it went really fast. jayden my brother started to scream. at the end there is a camera that says smile jayden made a funny face.

Then we went to driving school and there was little cars that we drove around a little town. thats all we did at movie.

bye readers i will talk more about australia next week bye.

        

6 comments:

  1. Hi,i'm glad you posted about your trip.

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    2. thanks for commenting on my blog it means alot to me. I could'int add that much because I was to busy.

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  2. Hey Shyla,
    This is a great blog post! It sounds like you did some really cool things. I want to know more about the whales... where did you see them? How was it?
    Something to work on in your blog post could be to include capital letters after every fullstop!
    Look forward to hearing from you.
    Miss Morgan

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    1. thanks miss morgan I might add more about the whales and movie world. thanks for commenting on my blog.

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  3. Hi Shylah it is Michaela here I like the way you have done your blog post about Australia. When I was reading it you were talking about the whales and I really wanted to know much more about them. What did the wales look like? and What color were they? But next time you could put capital letters at the start of the paragraphs. But it is a good blog post.

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