One of the activities we do during our literacy is a 100 word out story. The prompt we had in the first week was ..."it was completely out of tune." Here is my story
I went to a school. At that school I did music class. We had to go to training. I did the perfect sound but one day somehow it wasn’t the same. I was getting ready for school till i heard someone crying really badly I ignored that and just went to school. I went in music class it was time to shine but I was scared. I got really nervous. It was my part I had to do solo. When i started to play the violin everybody started to boo at me that's because it was completely out of tune.
I hope you enjoyed my writing have a nice day.
Monday, 25 February 2019
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Hi Shylah This is Tori. That is cool that you do 100 word count stories.
ReplyDeleteit is ggod that you told in the story that you did music class so then people now you really know how to play violin. next time you should maybe put that you really train alot.
hi tory thanks for the tip but I don't play violin in real life.
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ReplyDeleteGood day Shylah,
ReplyDeleteI'm Venice. Great job on your 100 word count story, i really like it. I know the feeling when you have to write completely 100 words. I think maybe you could reread what your writing about. Have you played any instrument before? Are the story's you wrote are real? make sure to keep on blogging to help you on your reading and writing. 😀
hi venice thanks for saying I did a good job. No i haven't played a interment before. You know how it fells to write 100 words. The story is not real. thanks for encoring me to do more blog posts.
ReplyDeleteHello my name is Talisa,
ReplyDeleteI like you blog post. It is fine. Is the story true? Do you like making 100 word counts. next time maybe you should reread your blog post for capitals.