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Monday, 19 August 2019

the best 100 word count I have ever done

today im going to be showing you my new 100 word count. the words we have to use are, cats, tropical, turquoise, sailed and queitly. the story is completely 100 words. here you go. 



I made a boat because I was stuck on a island. The island was a tropical island. I sailed the boat very quietly. I saw lots of cats in the turquoise sea. I put then on the boat and I sailed them home. They were my cats now. When I got home my neighbours called me a crazy cat man. But I was saving cats lives from drowning. Cats are the best they are so cuddly. I went to the shop and bought some cat food. On the way back I found a stray dog, I made it my pet. 

That's my 100 word count I hope you like it. I will see you next week. Have a good day and be nice to everybody. bye readers!


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2 comments:

  1. Nicola Scott10 September 2019 at 16:16

    Hi Shylah, I like the way you have used all five words in your work. Using turquoise to describe the sea was a good idea. How do you think the cats and the dog will get on?

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    1. Anonymous13 September 2019 at 10:13

      Thank you Nicola Scott for commenting on my blog. The cats and dogs will get along because they live in the same place and they have to get along. Did you like my 100 word count?

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