Hi its me again! I'm a year six now, and today were doing 100 word count again. So I'm gonna show you my one. 100 word count is when you are given a sentance or words and you have to put them into a story, and it HAS TO BE 100 WORDS. The sentence my class had to write was, "as it flew towards us, I couldn't see what it was." So here is mine! enjoy!
One dark night me and my friends, Tiana and Venice were going on a walk to the haunted house. People said that there were ghosts. When they throw something at you that means you’re going to go to jail. We were all scared to go. So before I went to meet up with them I told my parents that we were going to the park, I’m so smart. When we went to the haunted house I saw something flying, it was flying towards us. As it flew towards us I couldn’t see what it was. I spent years in jail.
That's the end of my story. I hope you enjoyed it. Have a nice day and also be nice to others. Bye!
Friday, 14 February 2020
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Hello Shylah, It is Talisa. Good job on your blog post. I like how your story goes and how it is really interesting.Nest time maybe you could check your title for mistakes. Goodbye
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