It was my niece’s birthday next week so I had to get her a present. So I went to the mall to get some decorations. When I got to the mall I was wearing a bag that had my wallet and phone in it. But I got kicked out of the mall because they thought I was stealing. When I was going back home I was really angry and I didn’t wear my seatbelt. I called my friend and told her everything but we took no notice of the sign. And that’s how I’m at the hospital and I’m sad.
That's the end of it, I hope you enjoyed. Have a nice day and please comment what you liked about it. Always be kind to others. Bye!
Thursday, 12 March 2020
100 word count part 2
Today I'm going to show you my 100 word count. The sentence that we had to do was "we took no notice of the sign." Here is mine I hope you enjoy.
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Hello Shylah. I haven't read all of your story as it goes across the page.Is there any chance you could fix it up and let me know when you have,so I can read it and leave a comment?.
ReplyDeleteI look forward to hearing from you.