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Friday, 5 June 2020

100 word count week 8

Hello readers, today im going to be showing you my 100 word count. It is week 8 now at school and the 100 word count we have been doing is "that's when I knew I should run." Here is my 100 word count story!



It was my first time going to the supermarket. My mum was a criminal. When we made it to the market and got all the food we needed. Apples, Pineapples, chocolate, milk, chips and finally, eggs. My mother didn’t have enough money to pay for the food so she started to run. That’s when I knew I should run. I ran as fast as I could but I was too slow. They started running after my mother while I was left behind with the workers. What will happen to my mother? Will she go to jail? How will I live?
that is the end of my story. I hope you have a great day and always be nice to others. Goodbye readers and have an amazing day!

1 comment:

  1. Hello Shylah.
    Can you please fix your story so it goes down the page?.Thank you.

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