Today I'm going to tell you about a story of Vinegar for 100 word count story. I hope you enjoy.
I was eating my tea. My mum put this weird thing called vinegar and it was disgusting she put heaps on my plate and it taste like spoiled milk. My mum said that it is the best thing in the world but it was not. It was way to sharp because it had this weird taste inside like it was worms it was really disgusting but I got over it. My mum said that she uses vinegar because she uses it to cook really yum thing like cake and muffins. After tea I went to bed and dreamed about vinegar.
That is the end of my story about vinegar. It is not true and I have never tasted vinegar before so I said it was disgusting. Have a nice day.
Friday, 8 March 2019
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Good day, Shylah
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I've seen a lot of your blog posts. I love your 100 word counts. I've tasted vinegar before and it wasn't that bad. Did you only ate vinegar? What was mixed with the vinegar? Next time maybe you could change "because" into a comma. Keep up the good work.