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Friday, 29 March 2019

100 word count story

Today i'm going to show you the story that I made for school it was about vinegar. I hope you enjoy. The sentance we had to do was ...the vinegar was to sharp...


I was eating my tea. My mum put this weird thing called vinegar and it was disgusting she put heaps on my plate and it taste like spoiled milk. My mum said that it is the best thing in the world but it was not. It was way to sharp because it had this weird taste inside like it was worms it was really disgusting but I got over it. My mum said that she uses vinegar because she uses it to cook really yum thing like cake and muffins.  After tea I went to bed and dreamed about vinegar.




that is the end of the story. feel free to comment. it would really help me. have a nice day everybody.


2 comments:

  1. Hello Shylah.Vinegar is nice if you are eating salt and vinegar chips.I'm not that keen on the smell of it.Maybe next time you could use a bit more punctuation in your work.Did you wake up in the morning and start thinking about vinegar?

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