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Friday, 24 July 2020

100 word count, then I saw it

Hello readers, 
Today i'm going to be showing you my 100 word count I have done. For my 100 word count you have to write a story with 100 words. But you get a sentence or words that you have to add in your story. This week we had to do the sentence. 'and then I saw it.' Here is my 100 word count story I have done. 


It was a dark and stormy night. I was going outside because I wanted to. As I walked around the corner I saw a snail with a long tail. I remembered that last time I saw a snail with a tail a tornado came and ruined my house, and then I saw it, instead of a tornado it was a tsunami. The tsunami swooshed me away and I saw a great white shark in the water. I looked deeper into the ocean and saw my parents making dinner. “What’s for dinner?” I asked but they didn’t respond. They said nothing.
That is the end of my 100 word count story. I hope you enjoy my story and enjoyed my blog. Have a good day and always be nice to others, bye readers!

1 comment:

  1. Hello Shylah, I really like your 100 word count. I like the way you said " The tsunami swooshed me away and saw an great white shark!". Why did your parents didn't respond back?.. This is a lovely 100 word count. Bye Shylah!

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